I send e-mail for my host family

I send e-mail for my host family, but I can't receive them reply yet. I'm worried that my homestay life on this summer vacation. Were there bad points in this letter? Please tell me.

Dear my host family

　Hi, thank you for accepting me on this summer vacation. I’m deeply grateful to you! My name is Hiromi Shimozono.Please call me Hiromi.

Iwould like to know about your family. How many people are composed of yourfamily? My family is a father, a mother and younger sister. My father is Yoshihiro, he is an architect. My mother is Misuzu, she has a part time job. Mysister is Emi, she is a second grade high school student. She goes to the private girl’s high school. I go to Kumamoto Gakuen University. My parent’s house is in Miyazaki, but I live in Kumamoto alone now. So I am sad because I live apart from my family. I go to school in Kumamoto to study English hard.

What do you like to do? I like cooking, but I can’t cook very well. If I may, I’dlike to cook something with you. Please let me help housework with you. I’dlike to cook something Japanese dishes someday. As far as foods, I’m not fan ofperishables such as the liver, so if you served it, I couldn’t eat it. I’m sorry.

I’m looking forward to see your family, but I can’t speak English very well. So I’m worried that I can’t talk well with you, but I do my best. I’d like to know about your family. If you have time, please reply me. Thank you!!

From Hiromi 　（263/7015 words）