Draft Essay:2-2a My favorite place

Hi, everyone! Where is your hometown? I’m from Miyazaki. So I like my hometown because I have lived there since I was born. I introduce my favorite place in my hometown. There are many wonderful places in my hometown. For example nature, school which I had gone, my parents’ house and so on. There are wonderful things for me. I’ll introduce the best place I think that is high school.

First reason I like high school which I had gone is there are many good teachers in there. Especially I think Mr. Muraoka teacher took care of me, so I appreciated his kind, he always considerate me. Whenever I was worried about something, he talked me “What’s happened?” “I’ll consult with your worrying”. So I talked about my worrying of studying, university and so on. Mr. Muraoka teacher was never in change my class, but he was the head teacher in charge of all classes. And then when I took an exam for Kitakyuushu Kouritsu college’s recommendations from their high school, he was in charge of me. So he told me many useful things.

Second reason I like high school which I had gone is events which we tackled seriously. For example athletic festival, culture festival school excursion and so on. My best memory of high school event is culture festival. Our class won the championship of a chorus in culture festival. We were very happy we were the champion. It was the best memory of my high school life.

Third reason I like high school which I had gone is there were many goods friend in there. When I was a high school student, everyone got along with each other. So sooo funny every day!! We studied together, played free time, quarreled with each other. But they were good memories for me. Especially I appreciated Shihoko, she is a friend of mine since I was in high school. She is kind and powerful girl. I sometimes quarreled with her but we always got along with each other. When I took an exam of Kitakyuushu University, she made pencil box for me. And the she said me “I wish you will pass the exam!!” I was so happy, I kept it and used it now. I think she is the best friend. She goes to Miyazaki University, so I can’t meet her frequently. However we have free time, we always meet and go somewhere and talk about each other. I want to meet her again.

This is why I like high school. Whenever I have free time, I always go there to see teachers with my friends. I think sometimes I want to come back in high school life. So I am looking forward to see each other in a coming-of-age celebration. Maybe some people changed their appearances. They are the part of my pleasure. (475/7729 words)